zindagi ma roshni ki kami thi magar
aata tha saya apna har taraf se nazar
diya sath mera har morr pe is qadar
umeed ki kiran ki ho gai mujhe qadar
andhere se darne ka maqsad hua ab khatam
diye se diya hai ab jalana har qadam
rahon ko roshni se sajana hai ab
naii manzilon ko aagay pana hai ab
chalo sath humare...... ????????
.....?????????/
i couldnt finish it...
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post ur poetry...
ITS UR TURN
thank u
its good but sorry cant help u out in this. u cant do it remarkably, i bet!
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